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FACTORS THAT HELP IN FORMING GOOD WRITERS

A MAJOR PROJECT

SUBMITTED TO THE FACULTY OF LETTERS

AND THE INSTITUTE OF ECONOMICS AND SOCIAL SCIENCES

OF BILKENT UNIVERSITY

IN PARTIAL FULFILLMENT OF THE REQUIREMENTS

FOR THE DEGREE OF MASTERS OF ARTS IN

THE TEACHING OF ENGLISH AS A FOREIGN LANGUAGE

BY

NUKTE OCAL

August, 1989

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BILKENT UNIVERSITY

INSTITUTE OF ECONOMICS AND SOCIAL SCIENCES

MA MAJOR PROJECT EXAMINATION RESULT FORM

August 31, 1989

The examining committee appointed by the

Institute of Economics and Social Sciences for the

major project examination of the MA TEFL student

NUKTE OCAL

has read the project of the student.

The committee has decided that the project

of the student is satisfactory/unsatisfactory.

Project Title:

FACTORS THAT HELP IN FORMING GOOD WRITERS

Project Advisor:

Dr.

John R.

Aydelott

Bilkent University, MA TEFL Program

Committee Member:

Dr.

James G.

Ward

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I certify that I have read this major project and that in my

opinion it is fully adequate, in scope and in quality, as a major

project for the degree of Masters of Arts.

ClXl

John R.

Ayd)elott

(Advisor)

I certify that I have read this major project and that in my

opinion it is fully adequate, in scope and in quality, as a major

project for the degree of Masters of Arts.

Approved for the

Institute of Economics and Social Sciences

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TABLE OF CONTENTS

Sections

Pages

I. INTRODUCTION... 1

II. WHAT DOES A GOOD WRITER DO?... 4

A.

Change in Research on Writing Pedagogy... 4

B.

A Review of Experiments on Composing Processes... 6

1.

Planning...

6

2.

Rescanning... 8

3 .

Revising... 8

4 .

.

Summary... 11

C.

Awareness of Audience... 11

III. THE EFFECT OF READING ON WRITING... 13

A.

Review of

Research...

13

B.

What Does the Theory Tell Us?... 16

IV. PRESENTATION AND ANALYSIS OF THE DATA..,...18

A.

Characteristics of the Data... 18

B.

Composing Processes... 19

C .

Audience... 21

D.

Reading and Writing... 22

V. THE ROLE OF INSTRUCTION IN

DEVELOPING THE

WRITING

SKILLS... 26

A.

Introduction... 26

B.

The Complexity Argument... 28

C.

The Problem of Approach... 29

D.

Two Main Issues: Frequency of Writing

and Grammar Teaching... 31

1.

Frequency... 31

2.

Grammar... 32

VI. IMPLICATIONS OF THE RESEARCH FOR THE

CLASSROOM... 34

A.

Teaching Strategies... 34

B.

Evaluation...

37

VII.

CONCLUSION... 38

VIII.

REFERENCES... ... 41

IX. APPENDIX... ’ ... ... 44

A.

Questionnaire... 45

B.

Letters... 47

X. CURRICULUM VITAE...50

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FACTORS THAT HELP IN FORMING GOOD WRITERS

I. INTRODUCTION

The field of Teaching English as a Foreign Language (TEFL)

now recognizes the importance of writing as one of the major

means of communication.

Thus, communicative language teaching is

more and more concerned with improving students' writing skills.

Especially in academic settings such as the teaching of English

at universities, one of the main goals is to develop students'

writing abilities.

Although research on writing and the teaching

of writing in foreign language has been late and sporadic, with

the increasing interest in the field, it has become one of the

attractive areas in TEFL.

This study is based upon two main issues both related to

the cognitive dimension of composition writing.

One of the

concerns is the composing processes of second language student

writers and the other one is the acquisition of writing style

through reading.

On the one hand, composing strategies that good

writers effectively use are studied.

On the other hand, the

influence of the amount and quality of pleasure reading on

writing ability is researched.

When we think of an EFL context

where Turkish students write in English we are immediately

interested in the implications of the above issues for the

teaching of writing.

Thus, the areas this paper touches upon can

be expressed by the following questions:

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- What kinds of composing processes do good writers use?

- Does reading in the first or second language affect second

language writing?

-- Is deliberate instruction of writing influential on the

development of writing skills?

- What type of instruction is more effective?

As a result of these considerations I preferred a general

statement for my topic: "Factors That Help In Forming

Good Writers."

The research process includes several components.

A part

of it is based on library research.

For this study, I have

reviewed accounts of related, recent research.

I realize that

empirical investigation on second language writing is rare and

still very limited; therefore, I also concentrated on and got

insight from the research done on first language writing.

The

other component of this study consists of the description of a

group of EFL student writers.

A questionnaire was given to

students and results were used as data.

Through a comparison of

the research on effective writing and the description of student

writers, I have made some suggestions for teachers of EFL

writing.

Analyzing and clarifying the variables that lead to good

writing are of primary importance in developing students'

communicative writing skills.

If some consistent results are

obtained, teaching methodologies and approaches can be rearranged

to suit students' needs.

If the required changes are within the

material possibilities, then, there will be hope for teachers and

administrators in forming good writers out of Turkish English

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1a n g u a g e s t u d e n t s

-The g r o u p w h o will b e n e f i t m o s t from this p r o j e c t is s t u d e n t w r i t e r s of E n g l i s h - H o p ef u l l y , the p r o j e c t will sho w them g u i d e l i n e s for c h o o s i n g the best s t r a t e g i e s in the

a c q u i s i t i o n and d e v e l o p m e n t of the s e c o n d l a n g u a g e w r i t i n g skill. The o t h e r g r o u p that can b en e f i t from the p r o j e c t is o b v i o u s l y the w r i t i n g t e a c h e r s w h o plan c l a s s a c t i v i t i e s . A c t i v i t i e s

can be r e a r r a n g e d and r e s c h e d u l e d to i n c l u d e the c o m p o n e n t s that w o ul d c r e a t e the m o s t f a v o r a b l e c o n d i t i o n s for the i m p r o v e m e n t of w r i t i n g skills. A n o t h e r g r o u p of p r o f e s s i o n a 1s that may take a d v a n t a g e of this s t u d y is c u r r i c u l u m d e s i g n e r s who d e s i g n the w r i t i n g p r o g r a m s w i t h r e f e r e n c e to the o b j e c t i v e s of overall

l a n g u a g e

program-Q u e s t i o n n a i r e s and the a n a l y s i s of q u e s t i o n n a i r e s form the c ru c i a l part of the project- I g a v e a g r o u p of u n i v e r s i t y

s t u d e n t s q u e s t i o n n a i r e s in o r d e r to find out a b o u t their c o m p o s i n g p r o c e s s e s and their r e a d i n g habits. A f t e r the c o l l e c t i o n of the q u e s t i o n n a i r e s , s t u d ents' i n s t r u c t o r s we r e c o n s u l t e d for a c o m p a r i s o n of e a c h s t u d e n t ' s q u e s t i o n n a i r e

r e s u l t s and the i n s t r u c t o r ' s h o l i s t i c e v a l u a t i o n of the s t u d e n t ' s w r i t i n g . Data a n a l y s i s and i n t e r p r e t a t i o n w e r e s u p p l e m e n t e d w i t h l ib r a r y r e s e arch. It s h o u l d be n o t e d h o w e v e r that the

q u e s t i o n n a i r e was n o t d e s i g n e d w i t h i t ems r e f e r r i n g to students' p r e s e n t or p r e v i o u s i n s t r u c t i o n in w r i t i n g - For this project, i n d i v i d u a l s t r a t e g i e s and h a b i t s are of co n c e r n - I n s t r u c t i o n a l p r o c e d u r e s are d e a l t w i t h in the last part of the pa p e r as

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A n o t h e r s o u r c e of i n f o r m a t i o n is the letters and a r t i c l e s o b t a i n e d from w e l l - k n o w n n a m e s in the field. L e t t e r s and

m a t e r i a l s r e c e i v e d from Jann H u i z e n g a , V i v i a n Zamel and Ilona Leki a re v a l u a b l e g u i d e s and s u p p o r t for the project.

This r e s e a r c h is limited to T e a c h i n g E n g l i s h as a F o r ei g n L a n g u a g e . A l t h o u g h the body of r e s e a r c h on the t e a c h i n g of

c o m p o s i t i o n in n a t i v e E n g l i s h c l a s s e s has been of m u c h help, the a ctual d a t a w e r e c o l l e c t e d from B i l k e n t U n i v e r s i t y , P r e p a r a t o r y S c h ool. The s u b j e c t s w e r e a d u l t l e a r n e r s of E n g l i s h who aged

from 18 to 25. T h e i r p r o f i c i e n c y level was high i n t e r m e d i a t e . Again, the r e s e a r c h w as limited to the i n v e s t i g a t i o n of the

w r i t i n g skill. A l i m i t a t i o n that can a f f e c t the o u t c o m e s of the s t u d y is the q u a l i t i e s of the w r i t i n g t e a ch e r s w ho e v a l u a t e d the w r i t i n g of the s t u d e n t s s e r v i n g as s u b j e c t s . Here, I have m a i n l y r e l i e d on p e r s o n a l j u d g e m e n t of t e a c h e r s w h o have n ot had m u c h e x p e r i e n c e in t e a c h i n g and e v a l u a t i n g writ i n g .

II. WHA T DOES A G O O D W R I T E R DO? A . C h a n g e in R e s e a r c h on W r i t i n g P e d a g o g y

When o n e m e n t i o n s " f a c t o r s that m a k e good w r i t e r s " this b r i n g s to m i n d the d e s c r i p t i o n of a good w r i t e r and the

d e s c r i p t i o n of the s t r a t e g i e s he or she uses. In r e c e n t y e a r s th e r e has been a s h i f t in the r e s e a r c h on w r i t i n g p e d a gogy. In the past y e a r s r e s e a r c h was c a r r i e d out in o r d e r to d e t e r m i n e the e f f e c t i v e n e s s of d i f f e r e n t a p p r o a c h e s to the t e a c h i n g of writing. R e s e a r c h of this s o r t c o m p a r e d o n e kind of i n s t r u c t i o n wi t h

a n o t h e r in the e f f o r t to find the best method. But these e f f o r t s w e r e based on the f a u l t y a s s u m p t i o n s that there was a best m e t h o d

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of t e a c h i n g w r i t i n g and that good w r i t i n g c o n f o r m e d to a p r e d e t e r m i n e d and ideal model. H o w e v e r , now, w i t h p r o ce s s

s t u d i e s we u n d e r s t a n d the c o m p l e x i t y of w r i t i n g better. P r o c e s s s t u d i e s c o n s i s t i n g of c a s e s t udies, i n t e r v i e w s and s u r v e y s have r e v e a l e d the ’'complex," " r e c u r s i v e , " and " n o n l i n e a r " n a t u r e of c o m p o s i n g (Zamel, 1907). R e s e a r c h e r s are m o r e and m o r e

i n t e r e s t e d in the b e h a v i o r s , s t r a t e g i e s and d i f f i c u l t i e s of w r i t e r s . Thus, the r e s e a r c h in p e d a g o g y is, now, d o m i n a t e d by the a t t e m p t s to i n v e s t i g a t e the c o m p o s i n g p r o c e s s e s , w i t h s t u d i e s that e x a m i n e the w r i t i n g b e h a v i o r s of s k i l l e d and u n s k i l l e d

w r i t e r s - I n v e s t i g a t o r s focus on the f o l l o w i n g q u e s t i o n : W h a t do p r o f i c i e n t w r i t e r s do?

We u n d e r s t a n d that good w r i t e r s have d e v i s e d e f f e c t i v e s t r a t e g i e s for c o m p o s i n g and c u r r e n t r e s e a r c h is c o n c e r n e d w i t h these. R e s e a r c h e r s e x p l o r e w a y s p r o f i c i e n t w r i t e r s g e n e r a t e

ideas, r e c o r d them and r e f i n e them in o r d e r to form a text. They are m o r e and m o r e c o n v i n c e d that by s t u d y i n g and u n d e r s t a n d i n g the p r o c e s s of c o m p o s i n g o n e can gain i n s i g h t into how to teach i t (Z a m e 1, 1907) .

I n v e s t i g a t i o n s on u n s k i l l e d and s k i ll e d w r i t e r s have shown that w r i t i n g is a p r o c e s s of d i s c o v e r i n g and m a k i n g mean i n g . T h r o u g h the act of w r i t i n g itself, id e a s are e x p lo r e d , c l a r i f i e d and r e f o r m u 1 ated - As this p r o c e s s c o n t i n u e s , n e w ideas a p p e a r and they are i n c o r p o r a t e d into the p a t t e r n of thouglit. S k i l l e d w r i t e r s w h o u n d e r s t a n d that w r i t i n g m ay be r e c u r s i v e and n o n ­

l inear are a b l e to m o d i f y or ev e n a b a n d o n big c h u n k s of d i s c o u r s e or t h eir o r i g i n a l plan as they r e v i e w their w r i t i n g in terms of

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its f u n c t i o n and their readers' e x p e c t a t i o n s - H o w e v e r , u n s k i l l e d and b e g i n n i n g w r i t e r s r a r e l y e x p e r i e n c e w r i t i n g as a c o n t i n u o u s p r o c e s s of g e n e r a t i n g and i n t e g r a t i n g ideas- Ra t h e r , they are c o n v i n c e d that w r i t e r s know b e f o r e h a n d w h a t they are go i n g to say- Th e s e u n e x p e r i e n c e d w r i t e r s are s c a r e d of e x p l o r i n g their t h o u g h t s on paper. As F l o w e r p o i n t s out, their e a r l y d e c i s i o n s to p r o c e e d in a c e r t a i n d i r e c t i o n lock them into a p r e m a t u r e

s o l u t i o n b e f o r e they e n t e r the p r o b l e m (cited in Zamel, 1903, The C o m p o s i n g P r o c e s s e s ) . They base t h eir w r i t i n g on i n f l e x i b l e

p l a n s in a d d i t i o n to c o n s t a n t c o n c e r n w i t h m e c h a n i c s , corr^ectness and

form-B - A R e v i e w of E x p e r i m e n t s on C o m p o s i n g P ro c e s s e s

In this part I w a n t to p r e s e n t a r e v i e w of the s t u d i e s c a r r i e d out on the c o m p o s i n g p r o c e s s e s - I m p o r t a n t f i n di n g s of

these s t u d i e s b e l o n g to the field of t e a c h i n g E n g l i s h

c o m p o s i t i o n to n a t i v e s p e a kers. Still, som e o t h e r s t u d i e s have th e i r o r i g i n in E F L / E S L c o m p o s i t i o n c l a s s e s . R e s e a r c h , in

g e n e r a l , s h o w s that good w r i t e r s d i f f e r from poor w r i t e r s in

their c o m p o s i n g p r o c e s s e s in that they iiave b e t t e r p r o c e d u r e s for g e t t i n g their i d eas down on paper. Good w r i t e r s d i f f e r m a i n l y in

three ways: p l a n ning, r e s c a n n i n g and r e v i sing.

1. P l a n n i n g

R e s e a r c h s h o w s that the g o o d w r i t e r p lans m o r e than the poor w r i ter. Th i s n e i t h e r m e a n s that good w r i t e r s work on a

formal plan n o r that they a l w a y s " p r e w r i t e - " In 1975, Emig did a s t ud y on p r o f e s s i o n a l w r i t e r s . This s t u d y r e v e a l e d that v e r y few

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p r o f e s s i o n a l w r i t e r s us e d the s t a n d a r d o u t l i n e form, but all

r e p o r t e d s o m e kind of p l a n n i n g of c o n t e n t and o r g a n i z a t i o n b e f o r e w r i t i n g - In 1974, S t a l l a r d found that good and a v e r a g e high

school w r i t e r s did not d i f f e r in o u t l i n i n g beh a v i o r , but good w r i t e r s took m o r e time r e g a r d l e s s of w h e t h e r they j u s t t h o u g h t or w r o t e notes, b e f o r e a c t u a l l y w r i t i n g , o n c e they w e r e g i ven the

topic in an i n - c l a s s e s s a y s i t u a t i o n - In 1979, P i a n k o r e p o r t e d s i m i l a r r e s u l t s in a s t u d y of " t r a d i t i o n a 1" and " r e m e d i a l "

c o l l e g e freshmen: the b e t t e r w r i t e r s took m o r e time b e f o r e

w r i t i n g - But in both s t u d i e s few s t u d e n t s r e p o r t e d u s i n g formal o u t l i n e s . In 1901, Wall and P e t r o v s k y found that m o r e of their best f r e s h m a n w r i t e r s r e p o r t e d s p e n d i n g a long time b e f o r e

b e g i n n i n g to write. Again, this s t u d y r e v e a l s that poor w r i t e r s r a r e l y m a k e any w r i t t e n plans or notes, p r e f e r r i n g to begin by "just b e g i n n i n g " (cited in K r a s h e n , 1904).

V i v i a n Zamel (1903) c a r r i e d out c a s e s t u d i e s on the c o m p o s i n g p r o c e s s e s of ESL s t u d e n t s . M o s t of the d a t a was c o l l e c t e d d u r i n g the o b s e r v a t i o n s e s s i o n s when s t u d e n t s w e r e e n g a g e d in real c l a s s r o o m w r i t i n g tasks. H o w e v e r , a d d i t i o n a l i n f o r m a t i o n a b o u t these students' w r i t i n g b e h a v i o r was o b t a i n e d at the end of the s e s s i o n s , when s t u d e n t s d i s c u s s e d i n f o r m a l l y their w r i t i n g e x p e r i e n c e s . The least s k i l l e d w r i t e r s a d m i t t e d that o n c e they c o n s t r u c t e d a plan at the b e g i n n i n g , they v i e w e d their e s s a y as a s t r a i g h t f o r w a r d e x p a n s i o n of this plan. On the o t h e r hand, the s k i l l e d w r i t e r s ga v e a ver y d i f f e r e n t a c c o u n t of the process. T h e y had f l e x i b l e pl a n s and w e r e a w a r e that they c o u l d leave ha 1f - f i n i s h e d t h o u g h t s and r e t u r n to them

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later-T h e s e w r i t e r s al s o t a lked a b o u t h a v i n g some ge n e r a l s e n s e of d i r e c t i o n , but n ot k n o w i n g in p a r t i c u l a r w h a t they w o u l d say. Th e y w e r e w i l l i n g to c h a n g e their i d eas as they w r o t e and to r e v i s e their o u t l i n e as new ideas and a r g u m e n t s e m erged.

2. R e s c a n n i n g

S t u d i e s reveal that good w r i t e r s p a use m o r e d u r i n g w r i t i n g and r e r e a d their text more. In S t a l l a r d ' s s t u d y good high school w r i t e r s s t o p p e d to r eread an a v e r a g e of 3 . 7 3 times per s t u d e n t d u r i n g the w r i t i n g of an essay, w h i l e r e r e a d i n g o c c u r r e d less than o n c e per s t u d e n t a m o n g the poor w r i t e r s - Again, P i a n k o ' s

" t r a d i t i o n a 1" s t u d e n t s p a u s e d n e a r l y twice as o ften d u r i n g w r i t i n g as r e m e d i a l s t u d e n t s and r e s c a n n e d their work n e a r l y three times as often. Wall and P e t r o v s k y a l s o r e p o r t a t e n d e n c y for m o r e f r e q u e n t r e r e a d i n g a mong t h eir m o r e a d v a n c e d w r i t e r s

(cited in Krashen, 1984).

In her c a s e s t u d i e s (Zamel, 1903, The C o m p o sing P r o c e s s e s ), Zamel r e p o r t s that o n e of her s k i l l e d w r i t e r s e x p r e s s e d the need to r e r e a d and e v a l u a t e her wr i t i n g :

When I r e r e a d , I find out that I d i d n ' t w r i t e w h a t I had in mind. The thing that I w a n t e d to say w a s not w h a t I wrote- I r eread to see if the w o r d s fit the idea- If it does, I go on .

K ra s h e n e x p l a i n s the need for r e s c a n n i n g w i t h the p r o b l e m of “ losing the place" that all w r i t e r s have. W r i t e r s face the

p r o b l e m of losing a s e n s e of the w h o l e e s s a y w h i l e in the act of w r i t i n g - Goo d w r i t e r s are a w a r e of this problem. They reread and r e s c a n for the p u r p o s e of r e v i e w i n g their initial plan, c o n s i d e r i n g c h a n g e s , i m p r o v e m e n t s and i n c o r p o r a t i n g ,new ideas.

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3 - R e v i s i n g

The focus of the r e v i s i o n s has been found m o r e s i g n i f i c a n t than the n u m b e r of r e v i s i o n s - W h a t d i f f e r e n t i a t e good w r i t e r s from bad w r i t e r s a r e the a r e a s they c o n s i d e r w h i l e revising. R e s e a r c h f i n d i n g s tell us that b e t t e r w r i t e r s focus on c o n t e n t and less a b l e w r i t e r s on s u r f a c e

form-In her work of 1900, S o m m e r s c o m p a r e s s t u d e n t s and

e x p e r i e n c e d w r i t e r s s u c h as j o u r n a l i s t s , s c h o l a r s and e d i tors- S he r e p o r t s that s t u d e n t w r i t e r s a s s u m e that the a i med m e s s a g e and m e a n i n g a re p r e s e n t in their first draft. R e v i s i o n is s i m p l y a m a t t e r of f i n d i n g the best w o r d s to e x p r e s s them- On the o t h e r hand, Sommers' e x p e r i e n c e d w r i t e r s v i e w r e v i s i o n d i f f e r e n t l y .

For them the a im of the r e v i s i o n is to r e c o n s i d e r the d e v e l o p m e n t of t h eir a r g u m e n t s . T h e i r first d r a f t g i v e s them a g e n e r a l view of the topic they w a n t to explo r e . S u b s e q u e n t r e v i s i o n s help e x p e r i e n c e d w r i t e r s c o n t i n u e to c r e a t e m e a n i n g .

In 1901, F a i g l e y and W i t t e s t u d i e d six p r o f e s s i o n a l w r i t e r s , six a d v a n c e d c o l l e g e w r i t e r s and six i n e x p e r i e n c e d w r i t e r s ( c o l l e g e f r e s h m e n d e f i c i e n t in w r i t i n g skills). T h e i r s u b j e c t s w r o t e on an a s s i g n e d topic in three s e s s i o n s , p l a nn i n g the f i rst d a y and w r i t i n g d r a f t s on the s e c o n d and third day. F a i g l e y and W i t t e r e p o r t e d s t a r t l i n g d i f f e r e n c e s b e t w e e n the g r o u p s w i t h r e s p e c t to the r e v i s i o n type- As S o m m e r s found, the m o r e a d v a n c e d w r i t e r s m a d e m o r e c o n t e n t r e v i s i o n s of the

" m a c r o s t r u c t u r e " type; that is, there was a m a j o r d i f f e r e n c e in the m e a n i n g of the essay- E x p e r i e n c e d w r i t e r s m a d e an a v e r a g e of

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19.6 m a c r o B t r u c t u r e c h a n g e s per 1000 w o r d s of text, a d v a n c e d

w r i t e r s m a d e an a v e r a g e of 23-1 suc h c h a n g e s , w h i l e i n e x p e r i e n c e d s t u d e n t w r i t e r s m a d e o n l y 1.3 m a j o r c h a n g e s per 1000 w o r d s of text. F a i g l e y and W i t t e al s o r e p o r t e d that the g r o u p s d i f f e r e d w i t h r e s p e c t to whe n they m a d e c h a n g e s . The two m o r e a d v a n c e d g r o u p s d e l a y e d m e c h a n i c a l and word c h o i c e c h a n g e s until the

s e c o n d draft. First, they p r e f e r r e d to deal s a t i s f a c t o r i 1y w i t h their s ub j e c t s . I n e x p e r i e n c e d s t u d e n t s s t o p p e d r e v i s i n g by the s e c o n d d r a f t and d e a l t w i t h m e c h a n i c s o n l y (cited in K r a s h e n ,

1904)-In their s t u d y on c o l l e g e f r e sh m a n s t u d e n t s Wall and

P e t r o v s k y r e p o r t e d s i m i l a r results- T h e i r best f r e s h m a n w r i t e r s u t i l i z e d r e v i s i o n m o r e for a d d i n g n e w ideas, m o d i f y i n g large s e c t i o n s and r e o r g a n i z i n g them. A v e r a g e s t u d e n t s did m o s t

rev i s i o n , but their r e v i s i o n was limited to the c 1a r i f i c a t i o n on initial ideas (e.g., a d d i n g e x a m p l e s , r e w o r d i n g ) . The least abl e g r o u p m a d e the f e w e s t word and p h r a s e c h a n g e s but w e r e w i l l i n g to add m at e r i a l (cited in Krashen, 1904).

In 1900, Perl c a r r i e d out a c a s e s t u d y w i t h five u n s k i l l e d c o l l e g e w r i t e r s - She found that poor w r i t e r s focus m u c h m o r e on form and less on c o n t e n t in r e vision. Perl r e p o r t s that her five w r i t e r s w e r e u n d e r the i m p r e s s i o n that r e v i s i n g was e s s e n t i a l l y e d i t i n g , the a p p l i c a t i o n of c o n s c i o u s r u l e s to small p o i n t s of g r a m m a r , s p e l l i n g and p u n c t u a t i o n and that s u c h e d i t i n g was a s u p r e m e l y i m p o r t a n t part of the c o m p o s i n g process. Perl n o t e s

that their " p r e m a t u r e " e d i t i n g b r oke "the r h y t h m g e n e r a t e d by t h i n k i n g and w r i t i n g " , c a u s i n g these w r i t e r s "to lose track of

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t h eir ideas" (cited in K r a s h e n , 1984).

I n t e r e s t i n g l y , in her c a s e s t u d i e s w i t h ESL s t u d e n t s , Zamel had s i m i l a r results. H er s k i l l e d w r i t e r s r e c o g n i z e the

i m p o r t a n c e of m e a n i n g - 1 e v e 1 c h a n g e s and e x p r e s s their c o n c e r n a b o u t them (Zamel, 1903, The C o m p o s i n g P r o c e s s e s );

I get a n g r y at m y s e l f when I c r o s s out an e n t i r e p a r a g r a p h a f t e r s p e n d i n g so m u c h time on it, but I know I have to do it if it d o e s n ' t m a k e s e n s e

-4. S u m m a r y

L i m i t e d r e s e a r c h into the s e c o n d l a n g u a g e c o m p o s i n g p r o c e s s s e e m s to para l l e l w h a t we learn from r e s e a r c h in first l a n g u a g e w r i t i n g . Of c o u rse, m u c h f u r t h e r r e s e a r c h into the s e c o n d

l a n g u a g e c o m p o s i n g p r o c e s s is n e c e s s a r y to d e t e r m i n e the e x t e n t to w h i c h t h ese f i n d i n g s are g e n e r a l i z e d . H o w e v e r , a c c o r d i n g to the e x i s t i n g r e s e a r c h c o m p o s i n g in a s e c o n d l a n g u a g e is an

e x t r e m e l y c o m p l e x u n d e r t a k i n g , but it s e e m s that this c o m p l e x i t y has m o r e to do w i t h the c o n s t r a i n t s of the c o m p o s i n g p r o c e s s tlian w i t h l i n g u i s t i c d i f f i c u l t i e s . W h i l e E S L X E F L s t u d e n t s mus t

c e r t a i n l y deal w i t h c o n c e r n s that are 1i n g u i s t i c - s p e c i f i c , it s e e m s that it is their w r i t i n g s t r a t e g i e s and b e h a v i o r s and not p r i m a r i l y l a n g u a g e p r o f i c i e n c y that d e t e r m i n e c o m p o s i n g skills. Thus, like i n e x p e r i e n c e d or basic n a t i v e l a n g u a g e w r i t e r s ,

u n s k i l l e d E F L / E S L w r i t e r s s e e m to have a ver y limited n o t i o n of w h a t c o m p o s i n g invo l v e s , and s k i l l e d E S L / E F L wr i t e r s , like good n a t i v e l a n g u a g e w r i t e r s , s e e m to be a w a r e of the v a r i o u s

d i m e n s i o n s and d e m a n d s of c o m p o s i n g

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с . A w a r e n e s s of A u d i e n c e

A p a r t from the c o m p o s i n g p r o c e s s e s we need to c o n s i d e r a n o t h e r i s sue c r u c i a l for p r o f i c i e n t w r i t i n g - It can be c a l l e d the s e n s e of a u d i e n c e . This c h a r a c t e r i s t i c is s t a t e d among the mai n f ac t o r s w h i c h form a good writer. H u i z e n g a (personal

c o m m u n i c a t i o n , M a r c h 28, 1989) e x p r e s s e s it as an a b i l i t y to e m p a t h i z e w i t h a reader- The w r i t e r s s h o u l d st e p out of their own s h o e s and read their w r i t i n g o b j e c t i v e l y .

In 1980, F l o w e r and H a y e s e x a m i n e d in detail c o m m e n t s w r i t e r s m a d e as they c o m p o s e d - Th e y used the "think aloud" t e c h n i q u e s w h i c h r e q u i r e that w r i t e r s v e r b a l i z e w h a t they are t h i n k i n g w h i l e w r i t i n g . F l o w e r and H a y e s found c l e a r d i f f e r e n c e s a m o n g " e x p e r t w r i t e r s , " t e a c h e r s of w r i t i n g and "novice"

w r i t e r s , c o l l e g e f r e s h m a n s t u d e n t s w h o have w r i t i n g problems- E x p e r t w r i t e r s are m u c h m o r e c o n c e r n e d w i t h their a u d i e n c e than poor s t u d e n t w r i t e r s . Th e y spend m u c h m o r e time th i n k i n g a b out the e f f e c t they w a n t to m a k e on their reader- They a re m o r e c o n c e r n e d w i t h the c h o i c e of the style, the b a c k g r o u n d k n o w l e d g e the r e a d e r will need and w h a t m i g h t i n t e r e s t the reader- On the o t h e r hand, s t u d e n t s w i t h w r i t i n g p r o b l e m s are a b s o r b e d in the

topic and sp e n d little time t h i n k i n g a b o u t the r e a d e r (K r a s h e n , 1984).

F l o w e r (1984) o p p o s e s writer— based p r ose to r e a d e r - b a s e d prose. She p o i n t s o u t that a l t h o u g h we o f t e n e q u a t e w r i ti n g w i t h the s t r a i g h t f o r w a r d act of "saying w h a t we mea n , " the mental s t r u g g l e s w r i t e r s go t h r o u g h and the m i s i n t e r p r e t a t i o n s r e a d e r s still m a k e s u g g e s t that we need a b e t t e r model of this process. M o d e r n c o m m u n i c a t i o n t h e o r y and p r a c t i c a l e x p e r i e n c e a g r e e on the

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f o l l o w i n g point: w r i t i n g p r o s e that a c t u a l l y c o m m u n i c a t e s w h a t we m e a n to a n o t h e r p e r s o n d e m a n d s m o r e than a s i m p l e act of s elf- e x p r e s s i o n . E f f e c t i v e w r i t e r s do n ot s i m p l y e x p r e s s t hought but

t r a n s f o r m it in c o m p l e x w a y s for the n e e d s of a reader. C o n v e r s e l y , i n e f f e c t i v e w r i t e r s are m e r e l y " e x p r e s s i n g "

t h e m s e l v e s by o f f e r i n g an u n d e r p r o c e s s e d v e r s i o n of their own thought- W r i t e r - b a s e d prose is c h a r a c t e r i z e d w i t h a m b i g u o u s r e f e r e n t s , w o r d s w h i c h have s pecial m e a n i n g for the writer,

u n d e r d e v e l o p e d i deas and lack of o r g a n i z a t i o n - Good w r i t e r s are a b l e to t r a n s f o r m w r i t e r - b a s e d p r o s e into r e a d e r - b a s e d prose- The y are s e n s i t i v e to the r e a d e r s ' n e e d s and p r o v i d e rich

c o n t e x t s to hel p the a u d i e n c e u n d e r s t a n d their me s s a g e . In o t h e r words, good w r i t e r s can m o v e from e x p r e s s i v e w r i t i n g to

i n t e r a c t i o n a 1 w r i t i n g - They see the i m p o r t a n c e of taking a social role and social p e r s p e c t i v e - T h e y can p r o d u c e d i s c o u r s e w h i c h is s e 1f - c o n t a i n e d w i t h all the n e c e s s a r y i n f o r m a t i o n

i n c l u d e d .

III. THE E F F E C T OF R E A D I N G ON W R I T I N G A . R e v i e w of R e s e a r c h

A v a r i e t y of s t u d i e s i n d i c a t e that r e a d i n g e x p o s u r e c o n t r i b u t e s to the d e v e l o p m e n t of w r i t i n g a b i lity- Pleading e x p o s u r e is m a n i f e s t e d in s everal ways. K r a s h e n s u g g e s t s the f o l l o w i n g c a t e g o r i e s , i n c l u d i n g both r e a d i n g in school and o u t s i d e s c h o o l :

1. S u s t a i n e d S i l e n t R e a d i n g p r o g r a m s 2. " S e l f - s e l e c t e d " r e a d i n g p r o g r a m s

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3. L i v i n g in a "print" e n v i r o n m e n t

4. P l e a s u r e r e a d i n g as r e p o r t e d by the r e a d e r s t h e m s e 1ves

5. R e a d i n g aloud to c h i l d r e n (K r a s h e n , 1985).

In this se c t i o n , I will m o s t l y deal w i t h the e f f e c t of v o l u n t a r y p l e a s u r e r e a d i n g upon w r i t i n g r e f e r r i n g to s o m e s t u d i e s d on e on "type 3," living in a pr i n t e n v i r o n m e n t and "type 5," r e a d i n g a l o u d to c h i l d r e n .

In 1978, a s t u d y c a r r i e d out by K i m b e r l i n g , Wi n g a t e ,

R o s s e r , D i c h a r a and K r a s h e n e x a m i n e d d i r e c t l y the c o n t r i b u t i o n of v o l u n t a r y p l e a s u r e r e a d i n g to the d e v e l o p m e n t of w r i t i n g ability. S i x t y - s i x f r e s h m a n u n i v e r s i t y s t u d e n t s w e r e g i v e n a q u e s t i o n n a i r e a s k i n g them to i n d i c a t e the a m o u n t of p l e a s u r e r e a d i n g they had d o n e at d i f f e r e n t times in their lives. They w e r e a l s o asked to w r i t e an e s s a y w h i c h was e v a l u a t e d by two raters. O n l y the

e s s a y s j u d g e d to be h i g h l y s u c c e s s f u l and ver y poor w e r e r e t a i n e d for f u r t h e r a n a l y s i s . The a n s w e r s to q u e s t i o n n a i r e s s h o w e d some c l e a r d i s t i n c t i o n s b e t w e e n good w r i t e r s and poor w r i t e r s - Good w r i t e r s r e p o r t m o r e p l e a s u r e r e a d i n g at all ages, e s p e c i a l l y d u r i n g hig h school (cited in Krashen, 1984).

In a s t u d y d o n e in 1967 by W o o d w a r d and P h i l l i p s good f r e s h m a n w r i t e r s r e p o r t e d m o r e r e a d i n g of the d a i l y n e w s p a p e r than poor w r i t e r s . In 1978, A p p l e b e e s u r v e y e d 48i good high school w r i t e r s , w i n n e r s of a c h i e v e m e n t a w a r d s in wr i t i n g . This s t u d y f u r t h e r s u p p o r t s the p o s i t i v e e f f e c t of r e a d i n g on writing. A p p l e b e e s t a t e s that s u c c e s s f u l w r i t e r s are also r e g u l a r

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r e p o r t e d an a v e r a g e of 14 books o v e r the s u m m e r v a c a t i o n . R y a n ' s r e s e a r c h c a r r i e d o ut in 1977 c o m p a r e d r e g u l a r c o l l e g e f r e s h m a n w r i t e r s w i t h those w h o a t t e n d sp e c i a l c l a s s e s b e c a u s e of their w r i t i n g problem- A f t e r c o n d u c t i n g home i n t e r v i e w s , Ryan r e p o r t e d that the "reg u l a r " writers' homes had m o r e books and a g r e a t e r v a r i e t y of books. But this r e s u l t is w e a k l y s u p p o r t e d by

Wookward. and P h i l l i p s who found that an equal n u m b e r of good and poor w r i t e r s r e p o r t e d m a n y b o oks in the home- A p a r t from the i n f l u e n c e of the pr i n t e n v i r o n m e n t Rya n al s o d e a l s w i t h the fifth type of r e a d i n g e x p o s u r e , that is, r e a di n g a l oud to c h i l d r e n - He r e p o r t s that the p a r e n t s of good w r i t e r s read m o r e f r e q u e n t l y to t heir c h i l d r e n than p a r e n t s of poor writ e r s - In 1976, McNeil e v a l u a t e d the r e s u l t s of a p l e a s u r e r e a d i n g p r o g r a m ("Hooked on Books") on boys aged from 12 to 17 in a school in M i c h i g a n ove r a t w o — y e a r period- He us e d a c ontrol g r o u p w ho did n o t go t h r o u g h s u c h a program- He r e p o r t s that " r eaders" g a i n e d g r e a t e r w r i ti n g f l u e n c y and w r o t e w i t h g r e a t e r c o m p l e x i t y than did the c ontrol s u b j e c t s - He a l s o r e p o r t s that " r e a ders" g a i n e d s e l f - c o n f i d e n c e and d e v e l o p e d b e t t e r a t t i t u d e s t o w a r d s r e a d i n g and w r i t i n g (cited in Krashen, 1984).

Ho w e v e r , one s t u d y did not find p l e a s u r e r e a d i n g - w r i t i n g r e l a t i o n s h i p . Illo r e p o r t s that c o r r e l a t i o n s of s e l f - r ep o r t e d p l e a s u r e r e a d i n g and f r e s h m a n c o m p o s i t i o n g r a d e s at S h i p p e n s b u r g S t a t e C o l l e g e s e e m e d weak. But Illo d o e s not p r o v i d e f u r t h e r de t a i l s - O t h e r s t u d i e s r e p o r t s t a t i s t i c a l l y s i g n i f i c a n t

c o r r e l a t i o n s b e t w e e n r e a d i n g a b i l i t y and w r i t i n g ability: G r o b e and Grobe, 1977, M a t h e w s , L a r s e n , and Butler, 1945, Zemdin, 1969, E v a n e c h , Ollilj and A r m s t r o n g , 1974 (cited in Krashen,

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B .

What Does the Theory Tell Us?

Krashen provides a theory that explains the reading-writing

relationship.

In his theory, he separates writing competence

which is the abstract knowledge the proficient writer has about

writing from performance which is the ability to put this

knowledge to use in an actual piece of writing.

It is

hypothesized that writing competence comes only from large

amounts of seIf-motivated reading for interest or pleasure.

Writing competence is acquired subconsciously; readers are

unaware they are acquiring it while they are reading.

It is

reading that gives the writer the sense for the look and

structure of reader-based prose.

Smith (1983) has come to similar conclusions.

He notes

that good writers have a great deal of knowledge of conventional

or formal features of reader-based prose they can call upon

whenever they need to perform.

Different

kinds of texts they

have read provide them with options that they can use to organize

and express their ideas.

Krashen expresses the theory as follows

(Krashen, 1984):

This hypopthesis does not predict a perfect correlation

between the amount of pleasure reading done and writing

ability.

It maintains only that all good writers will

have done large amounts of pleasure reading, not simply

" the more reading, the better the writing." There is,

in other words, a minimum amount of reading that every

good writer has done.

The reading hypothesis thus does

not distinguish excellent writers from merely good

writers-other factors such as creativity and experience

certainly play a role.

leather, good writers and

excellent writers have both read enough to have acquired

the code of written language.

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Smith is concerned with the ways the written code is

acquired.

He points out that the conventions of written language

are too complex to learn deliberately.

Even the basic rules of

punctuation, capitalization and grammar cannot be entirely taught

to others.

When it comes to subtle considerations such as style

and the intricate registers that written language itself demands

in different circumstances the attempts of deliberate instruction

are even more useless.

Trial and error cannot account for what

writers know.

No one could write enough and get sufficient

feedback to discover even a fraction of all relevant conventions.

The only place all the demonstrations are available is in the

text produced by others.

Smith argues that children must learn

to write by being accepted and by accepting themselves as members

of the club of written language users.

He goes on pointing out

that children learn what has sense and meaning.

The reading and

writing are for a purpose, not an exercise.

The learning is

unconscious and effortless; no one at the time would know that it

was actually taking place.

The learning is incidental; the child

is reading and writing for the sake of the reading and writing,

not for the sake of learning.

The learning is collaborative,

with the author being employed actively as guide and source of

knowledge (Smith, 1983).

All the research studies and theories mentioned above

belong to the field of first language composition.

Unfortunately, there is no research exploring the relationship

between LI reading and L2 writing that is available to me.

However, in her letter, Leki (personnel communication. Hay 5,

1989) mentions the accounts of the results of recent research on

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LI r e a d i n g and L2 w r i t i n g - A c c o r d i n g to Leki r e s e a r c h sh o w s no r e l a t i o n s h i p . T h i s po i n t is i m p o r t a n t for the a n a l y s i s and i n t e r p r e t a t i o n of the d a t a that I p r e s e n t in the n e x t section.

IV. P R E S E N T A T I O N A N D A N A L Y S I S OF THE D A T A A . C h a r a c t e r i s t i c s of the Data

The d a t a w e r e c o l l e c t e d t h r o u g h q u e s t i o n n a i r e (see

A p p e n d i x ) that was g i v e n to a g r o u p of B i l k e n t P r e p a r a t o r y School s t u d e n t s - T w e n t y - e i g h t s t u d e n t s from two d i f f e r e n t c l a s s e s

c o m p l e t e d the q u e s t i o n n a i r e s w i t h their n a m e s on it. The

s t u d e n t s w e r e at h i g h - i n t e r m e d i a t e level and a l t h o u g h they had two d i f f e r e n t t e a c h e r s they wen t t h r o u g h the same type of w r i t i n g i n s t r u c t i o n . A f t e r the q u e s t i o n n a i r e s w e r e c o m p l e t e d and

c o l l e c t e d , students' i n s t r u c t o r s w e r e c o n s u l t e d for their h o l i s t i c e v a l u a t i o n of eac h s t u d e n t ' s writ i n g . I n s t r u c t o r s e v a l u a t e d e a c h s t u d e n t as "poor," "good," or " a v e r a g e . " They a l s o p o i n t e d out the on e s w h o w e r e ver y good and those w ho w e r e r e a l l y weak- Then, am o n g these 20 s t u d e n t s the best five w r i t e r s and the p o o r e s t five w r i t e r s w e r e chosen. In sum, ten

q u e s t i o n n a i r e s w e r e s e l e c t e d for a n a l y s i s .

In the p r e v i o u s s e c t i o n s I p r e s e n t e d a r e v i e w of l i t e r a t u r e on the c o m p o s i n g p r o c e s s e s , a u d i e n c e a w a r e n e s s and the r e a d i n g -

w r i t i n g re 1 a t i o n s h i p . The q u e s t i o n n a i r e items f o l l o w e x a c t l y the o r d e r in w h i c h the r e v i e w is p r e s e n t e d . The first three items re f e r to the c o m p o s i n g p r o c e s s e s , p l a n ning, r e s c a n n i n g and

r e v i s i o n r e s p e c t i v e l y - The fou r t h item asks s t u d e n t s to i n d i c a t e how o f t e n they think a b o u t the reader- I terns 5, 6, 7 and 8 ask

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s t u d e n t s to p o i n t out the f r e q u e n c y and a m o u n t of r e a d i n g they do or did (see A p p e n d i x ) .

In this s t u d y w h a t is d i f f e r e n t from p r e v i o u s l y m e n t i o n e d s t u d i e s is that we a r e in an E n g l i s h as a F o r e i g n L a n g u a g e

c o n t e x t . The s u b j e c t s are T u r k i s h s t u d e n t s w h o w r i t e in English. E s p e c i a l l y the d a t a c o l l e c t e d in the " r e a d i n g and w r i t i n g "

s e c t i o n p r o v i d e us w i t h new i n f o r m a t i o n b e c a u s e so far onl y the r e a d i n g - w r i t i n g r e l a t i o n s h i p in the n a t i v e la n g u a g e has been e x t e n s i v e l y r e s e a r c h e d . In fact, the q u e s t i o n n a i r e items do not r e s t r i c t the l a n g u a g e of the r e a d i n g m a t e r i a l . It is s t a t e d that the r e a d i n g can be in "any language". The p u r p o s e of the r e a d i n g and w r i t i n g s e c t i o n is to look for the c o r r e l a t i o n b e t w e e n

r e a d i n g in the f i rst or s e c o n d l a n g u a g e and w r i t i n g in the s e c o n d language. Ho w e v e r , i n t e r v i e w s w i t h s t u d e n t s and t e a c h e r s s u g g e s t that in p l e a s u r e r e a d i n g and d a i l y n e w s p a p e r r e a d i n g T u r ki s h

r e s o u r c e s d o m i n a t e .

B . C o m p o s i n g P r o c e s s e s

The c h a r t b e l o w (Table 1) e x h i b i t s the three c o m p o s i n g s t r a t e g i e s use d by w r i t e r s in gene r a l . The n u m b e r s i n d i c a t e the n u m b e r of s t u d e n t s w h o c h e c k e d p a r t i c u l a r items. The first

s e c t i o n is c o n c e r n e d w i t h the time for p l anning, the s e c o n d w i t h the f r e q u e n c y of r e s c a n n i n g and the third w i t h the level of r e v i s i o n .

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C o r r e l a t i o n s b e t w e e n the q u a l i t y of the w r i ters and the s t r a t e g i e s they use Table 1 Good W r i t e r s P o o r W r i t e r s P 1ann ing - o ne m i n u t e 3 ~ th r e e m i n u t e s 1 2 - six m i n u t e s 4 1 R e s c a n n i n g - n e v e r 2 - r a r e l y 1 - o c c a s i o n a l 1 y 4 2 - c o n t i n u a l l y 1 R e v i s i o n - m a c r o s t r u e t u r a l c h a n g e s 1 - r e p h r a s i n g 3 g r a m m a r & s p e l l i n g 1 5

Analysis

S t r i k i n g l y , all poor w r i t e r s r e p o r t e d that they e x c l u s i v e l y deal w i t h the m e c h a n i c s w h i l e w r i t i n g their s e c o n d draft. This is c o m p l e t e l y in line w i t h the f i n d i n g s b e c a u s e poor w r i t e r s were found to focus on the form or " m i c r o s t r u e t u r e " when they revise. On the o t h e r hand, o n l y one good w r i t e r r e p or t e d e d i t i n g i nstead of m e a n i n g f u l r e v i s i o n - T h r e e of the good w r i t e r s r e p or t e d that

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they do rewording in order to better express their ideas.

Only

one good writer reported macrostruetural change.

Good student

writers in this study do not seem to reach the competency level

of experienced writers who view revision as a reconsideration of

the ideas and orientation of the composition.

Four good writers against two poor writers indicated that

they pause and reread their text occasionally.

On tlie other

hand, two of the poor writers reported that they never rescan.

One does it rarely.

Also, not one poor writer rescans

continually.· Contrastingly, there was not any good writer who

reported lack of rescanning or rare rescanning.

In the planning section we can again observe a contrast

between good and poor writers.

Three poor writers reported that

they think only one minute before starting to write.

In other

words, these poor writers showed no sign of planning.

They begin

by "just beginning" (see p. 7).

On the other hand, four good

student writers indicated six minutes of planning, which is the

maximum amount of time stated in the questionnaire.

Not one good

writer reported one minute of planning.

However, planning time

does not seem decisive of writing competency as two poor writers

against one good writer reported "thinking three minutes" and one

poor writer reported thinking for six minutes.

C . Aud.ieniiLe

The chart below (Table 2) shows how frequently the subjets

think about the effect they want to make on the reader.

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Relationship between the Quality oi

of the Audience

Table 2

Considering

the Reader

Good Writers

Poor Writers

always

2

1

sometimes

2

3

never

1

1

The data above do not indicate a significant difference

of attitude between good and poor student writers.

This is not

in line with research findings, according to which good writers

are much more concerned with their audience than poor writers.

The chart shows that eight out of ten student writers

somewhat think about the effect they want to make on the reader.

This result may be due to the fact that the audience for the

students

in the study is mainly their teacher.

Whether they are

good or poor writers they feel they need to please their teacher

even if it is simply for a higher grade.

Still, it is remarkable

that two students reported that they never think of the reader.

It seems that a writer-based, egocentric style is a problem

university composition teachers need to be aware of.

D .

Reading and Writing

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The charts below (Table 3, 4, 5 and 6) illustrate the

relationship between the subjects' reading habits and their

writing ability in four parts; the first part (Table 3) presents

the correlation between students' current frequency of pleasure

reading and their writing ability.

The second part (Table 4)

relates the number of books read during summer vacation to the

present writing ability.

The third part (Table 5) illustrates

the relationship between the frequency of pleasure reading done

at high school and the present writing ability of the subjects.

Finally, the last part (Table 6) exhibits the relationship

between the frequency of newspaper reading and the writing

quality.

Table 3

Current Reading Frequency

Good Writers

Poor Writers

every day

1

five times a week

1

twice a week

1

once a week

2

twice a month

2

once a month

1

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Ihs Amount of Books Read

Table 4

Good Writers

none

Poor Writers

1

2-4

4

1

5-8

1

2

more than 8

1

Table 5

Reading Frequency at High School

Good Writers

Poor Writers

©very day

1

twice a week

1

once a week

2

1

twice a month

2

3

Table 6

HsH.apapar.J&aading-ii'requencx

every day

several times a week

once a week

other

Good Writers

5

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AjcLBiixajLs.

When

vie

consider the answers to item 5 (Table 3) we notice

that all

of the good writers read more frequently than poor

writers.

It is worth noting that two of the poor writers did not

report any pleasure reading.

One of them checked the option no

and the other student, although she opted for yes, did not

indicate the frequency of reading and could not name a book she

had recently read.

On the other hand, three good writers

reported

reading for pleaure more frequently than once a week.

Here, we

can draw a parallel between poor writing

and deficient

reading habits.

Item 6 (Table 4) does not differentiate poor writers from

good writers.

While one poor writer did not report any pleasure

reading during summmer vacation, another one reports having read

more than eight books.

On the other hand, not one good writer

indicates more than eight books.

It seems that the amount of

books read has no effect on developing the writing skills.

Another factor may be that the books read during summer vacation

were in Turkish.

This result can thus be interpreted as first

language reading having no effect on second language writing.

Although in research literature pleasure reading at high

school appears as a strong factor in developing writing skills,

the chart above indicates little relationship.

Two good writers

against one report that they read once a week.

But otherwise

there is not a significant difference.

This result can be

interpreted as the low correlation between LI reading and L2

writing, tiLS students mainly read in Turkish during high school.

Similarly, it is possible to explain the contrast between good

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and poor writers in item 5 (see Table 3) as the effect of second

language reading on second language writing as three of the good

students gave the title of the book they read in English while

not one poor writer gave any English title.

This shows that some

of the good student writers do their pleasure reading partially

in English.

V

Finally, all the subjects equally report reading newspapers

every day.

Contradicting the previous research findings, there

seems to be low correlation between newspaper reading and good

writing.

But we should keep in mind the fact that the students

read Turkish newspapers.

Once again Li reading seems to have no

effect on L2 writing.

What comes out of this analysis is that although there is a

confirmed relationhip between the frequency of pleasure reading

and writing, this relationship is valid only in situations wliere

both the language of the reading material and the language used

in writing are English.

When the language of the reading

material is Turkish, reading does not seem to help writing in

English.

V. THE ROLE OF INSTRUCTION IN DEVELOPING WRITING SKILL

A.

In this section I will attempt to discuss some questions

raised about the instruction of writing.

My main concerns can be

expressed as follows:

to what extent does writing instruction help

in developing the writing skill? In which areas is it more

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composition in general, I will interweave concerns more

specifically related to the teaching of writing to EFL/ESL

students: what are the similarities and differences between

native composition classes and EFL/ESL composition classes? How

to teach writing? What kind of instruction is more useful?

In the area of instruction research again is limited to the

native English composition classes, but EFL/ESL researchers have

more and more been referring to research on native English

composition classes as an important source of information.

In

general, research suggests that some aspects of the writing skill

can be taught.

In a study carried out by Bambers in 1978

"regular" and "remedial" college writers were compared in terms

of their instructional background.

This study revealed that good

writers not only had done more expository writing in high school,

but had had more instruction on aspects of form, such as

supporting ideas with examples, clearly stating the topic and

structuring paragraphs.

In 1977, Shaughnessy studied freshmen

having severe writing problems and found that after one semester

of intensive instruction almost all students showed improvement.

However, progress was limited to certain features of writing.

Students were able to follow basic principles of a plan: they

could stay within their topic and could logically tie their

arguments to one another, but could not demonstrate skills beyond

these fundamentals (cited in Krashen, 1984).

Byrne (1988) suggests that in an EFL/ESL composition

situation there are other factors to take into consideration.

He

points out that expecially adult foreign language students are

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