Writing Skills 1
Paragraph Analysis
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• Paragraph writing is the step to writing essays.
At that stage you are expected to write a
number of paragraphs that are related to each other . The first task is on
punishment/criticism of children. Please
complete the paragraphs; do not forget the major and minor ideas and the conclusive statements.
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• Criticizing a child in public may be important, especially if they have been rude or hurtful to someone, or done
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• But outside of those circumstances, public
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• It also may not be a great idea to criticize when a child is already upset, or when they are in a situation where they need to keep their composure or not be distracted; that’s less about shaming and more about being kind and
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• If a child really doesn’t want to change a behavior, then you are going to have to think of a different way of
managing it than just pointing it out. ………. ……… ….. …
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